We just got on thne island and after I told Timothy that Iwanted to stay on thne raft but obviosly he didn't listen to me and forced me on the island. I was waiting for a schooner to come by but after a while it got boring. Through the whole day he built us a hut to sleep in. It was already dark so we started to go to sleep. The next few days, we were just wandering arround and building matresses. What was realy interesting, was that we gotto see the animals down at the reef and that we didn't have to watch out like the sharks. I guess this place isn't so bad after all.
Timothy told me that I had to start forming the mats but I couldn't see how. He kept on trying to explain me but I couldn't see what he was doing. I got so mad that I started screaming at him and yelling" you don't know how to spell." He slaped me across my face! We made up afterwards and we were friends. That night, it was raining very hard and me and Timothy were very happy. Wehoped that this much rain will come more often.
I'd love to see you get inside Phillip's head even more - not just what you have read in the novel. What else is he thinking? Why does he feel the way that he does? Careful with spelling and grammar!
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