Shipwreck ala Timothy

       I just finished a voyage and was on to the next. The past trip was relaxing and calm but of courseIstill had to work and make sure everything was running properly. I didn't feel very secure this time, but i guess it's just because I new that there were German submarines out and maybe they were out to get us! We were  going to Panama and then to Miami. We just past the Panama  Canal and  suddenly, all of the workers had heard a great boom then a worker yelled that we got torpedoed. We all new that we must get passengers in boats saffley. I got in a boat knowing that there were still a lot of passengers that I needed to save. I grabed the closest one near me and started paddeling, but on the way I found the chefs cat.
        After paddeling for a good two hours, I didn't know where to go but the little boy that I took with me woke up after being hit in the head. He told me that his head still hurt so he went back to sleep. We both got very dehidrated but still had some water left. He and I got to rest after the big disaster. We got to know each other, I liked him but I don't think he liked me.But  we will start to like each other. When it got dark we were ready to hunt fish.
    
    We had a very decent meal last night ( raw flying fish) and today we wanted to get to an island. In the morning, there was another large disaster. The little boy, phillip, was blind! He couldn't see a thing! For now were stuck with me, Timothy an old man, Stew Cat, a furry creature and Phillip, a blind fellow elleven- year-old. I hope we make all the way to a island.

I WANT TO EXCEL...

        I want to exel in  writing and grammer. This has always been a strugle for me and I never really got better at it. I just really don't like writing essay after essay, it is a bit annoying to revise and publish. But my goal for this year is to really excel writing proper sentences with proper grammer and punctuation. I hope that buy the end of the year I'll get a higher grade in these subjects.