A Horible Hurricane

            My heart is broken. Today i had a horrible day. In the morning i felt the heat and it was very eerie because afterwards Timothy told me that there would be a storm coming after we heard a loud noise. Right when we figuired out that there was going to be a storm, he rushed and got everything ready like bringing the water keg. We had to get ready by eating a lot because there is a chance that we wouldn't eat for a long time. The storm approched and i was shivering with frightness. I was on the ground  with Timothy for an hour or so. After we went to the palm tree with the rope. A big wave crashed, i got very wet. Then another great wave crashed Ithink i might of fell unconcios . When i woke up i saw Timothy, the storm was gladly over but he was on the ground but still breathing then he was worried about me said "Phillip are you okay?" I was tired and went to sleep but when i woke up, the blacknegro was dead.

MY EXPERIENCE ON THE ISLAND

           We just got on thne island and after I told Timothy that Iwanted to stay on thne raft but obviosly  he didn't listen to me and forced me on the island. I was waiting for a schooner to come by but after a while it got boring. Through the whole day  he built us a hut to sleep in. It was already dark so we started to go to sleep. The next few days, we were just wandering arround and building matresses. What was realy interesting, was that we gotto see the animals down at the reef and that we didn't have to watch out like the sharks. I guess this place isn't so bad after all.
        Timothy told me that I had to start forming the mats but I couldn't see how. He kept on trying to explain me but I couldn't see what he was doing. I got so mad that I started screaming at him and yelling" you don't know how to spell." He slaped me across my face! We made up afterwards and we were friends. That night, it was raining very hard and me and Timothy were very happy. Wehoped that this much rain will come more often.

HELP! find my son

        There has been a terrible shipwreck neer Panama. Many families have been seperated, lost, and maby even killed. One man, Phillip, Enright Senior has offered a reward for who will find his wife and his son.His son's name is Phillip, Enright Junior and he has blonde hair and red cheecks. His wifes name is Grace and he thinks they might have goten separated through out the shipwreck.The reward would be somthing great and giving. Hurry if you want to get that reward becuase your not the only one looking for it. 

Shipwreck ala Timothy

       I just finished a voyage and was on to the next. The past trip was relaxing and calm but of courseIstill had to work and make sure everything was running properly. I didn't feel very secure this time, but i guess it's just because I new that there were German submarines out and maybe they were out to get us! We were  going to Panama and then to Miami. We just past the Panama  Canal and  suddenly, all of the workers had heard a great boom then a worker yelled that we got torpedoed. We all new that we must get passengers in boats saffley. I got in a boat knowing that there were still a lot of passengers that I needed to save. I grabed the closest one near me and started paddeling, but on the way I found the chefs cat.
        After paddeling for a good two hours, I didn't know where to go but the little boy that I took with me woke up after being hit in the head. He told me that his head still hurt so he went back to sleep. We both got very dehidrated but still had some water left. He and I got to rest after the big disaster. We got to know each other, I liked him but I don't think he liked me.But  we will start to like each other. When it got dark we were ready to hunt fish.
    
    We had a very decent meal last night ( raw flying fish) and today we wanted to get to an island. In the morning, there was another large disaster. The little boy, phillip, was blind! He couldn't see a thing! For now were stuck with me, Timothy an old man, Stew Cat, a furry creature and Phillip, a blind fellow elleven- year-old. I hope we make all the way to a island.

I WANT TO EXCEL...

        I want to exel in  writing and grammer. This has always been a strugle for me and I never really got better at it. I just really don't like writing essay after essay, it is a bit annoying to revise and publish. But my goal for this year is to really excel writing proper sentences with proper grammer and punctuation. I hope that buy the end of the year I'll get a higher grade in these subjects.